my story that im writing

hi this is Josephine i have a story that i would really want you to comment or read it at least so please read it i am not finished with it yet though https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A8Uspq1-1fZDdfBCojkyj-z_gTbOO338lTgaLcUcLmU/edit?hl=en_GB